Misleading and Movie Fun

I heard people talk about it in class.  They watched as it unfolded. They couldn't believe their eyes.  A nine-year-old girl was about to get married.  

When I heard this, I automatically thought this was happening at a polygamist sect in Texas or something of that nature.  Even when I went to CNN.com to look at the story they had positioned it something to the effect of, "Nine-year-old marries in Texas." 

When I clicked on the story I was completely amazed to find out this had nothing to do with what I thought.

http://www.wfaa.com/sharedcontent/dws/wfaa/latestnews/stories/wfaa090222_mo_dyingwish.41fc01bd.html

Turns out the nine-year-old is terminally ill, and dreamed of getting married.  Now, I am not here to position the morals or pass judgment of this event, but I am going to bring up the fact that journalist tend to hype headlines.   

CNN was telling the truth , a little girl was about to get married, but should they have included part of the detail in the headline?  Would that have caught peoples attention?  

I don't know whether or not it matters, but after reading comments , it seemed as though many people were thinking of one subject going into the story and then were surprised.  We are taught to use the surprise factor in journalism, but when does surprising almost to the point of misleading wrong?  

As I grow in my journalism career I will learn about headlines.  I already know they have a tremendous impact  on society, even to the point where events are given names because of headlines.  My hypothetical guess is newsrooms in all mediums of journalism do this to attract readers.  I was sucked in, they got me, I was interested to see what was this all about.  I think I would have been equally interested though if the extra details were given in the headline.  There is a movie by Nicholas Sparks called, "A walk to Remember."  Same scenario , the leading actress is terminally ill and creates a list of dreams and goals she would like to accomplish before she dies.  Well , she gets married , granted she is in her late teens early twenties, but after I saw the story of this nine-year-old that movie came to mind.  

This past week I spent a lot of time in Fulton.  I wanted to explore the connection between movies and the economy.  During the Great Depression , 9/11 and other tough times in American history, people tend to go to the movies to get away from reality.  With in the past two months, movie theaters have seen and increase in box office sale.  This is due to several things, first it's a cheap form of entertainment and it's also Oscar season.  

I went to the movies by myself two weekends ago and after I came out this idea came to me.  I felt stressed out and wanted to get away and step outside of my shoes.   I contacted  Fulton Cinema 8 and asked them if they had seen an increase in ticket and they said "yes."  I thought I was golden and could build a great story. 

Well I contacted experts( MU professors)  and many did not have the numbers or knowledge of this topic specifically.  Many were able to explain the "Golden Age" during the Great Depression, which was great, but I wanted more specific figures and numbers of  recent years. 

So I went to Fulton and checked out the theater and noticed people carrying in cans.  The movie theater set up a table underneath the marque inside the lobby and the table was very colorful with many cans.  

Come to find out the theater sent out coupons to Fulton residents  and if they bring in the coupon with a can of food they can receive a free movie ticket.  I thought this was interesting and found out the local food panty had an increase in people needing food.

I truly enjoyed meeting people in Fulton they were all so nice!  I find it interesting that SERVE, the Fulton food pantry, experienced lows, but put out a plea to local businesses and organizations and has since received a lot of food.  Lisa Brown the executive director of SERVE said they are beginning to see churches and other organizations slow down on the donations because instead of giving to SERVE they are giving aid to their own members, and volunteers.

My favorite thing out of this entire story was my shot of Lisa.  I thought it was one of the best shots I have ever done in my life!  I can't say the same for other shots in my package, but at least I am happy with one.  My interviewing skills are getting better as I am able to get longer answers out of people.  

I am looking forward to fixing mistakes in my next package so I can get better and build some confidence.

cheers,

-Sophia Beausoleil 

"Me" in a Story and Being Verbs

I love listening to NPR and All Things Considered in particular.  I was listening to a story by David Greene called  "The Real World: 'We're Not Looking Forward To It.'" http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=100651923  Greene goes to a cafe in Atlanta and talks to workers and customers in their 20s and early 30s.  Each person had a story to tell, but all had one particular concern, jobs.  As these young people begin to face reality of the recession they are all concerned about their future.

While I found the story interesting , hence I myself am concerned about my future after college, I wanted to look beyond me and focus on the delivery of the story.

The reason why these stories compel listeners have to do with all the natural sound.  You could hear the clicking of plates, the conversations in the background and it reminded me of sitting in a cafe.  

Greene used himself in the story quite a bit.  Meaning, "I" , "Me" , "We".   "As I made my way down I75."  "When I came to breakfast."  Some may argue he interjects himself too much into the story, but I like it.  I think it serves the purpose of making the listener feel like they are on the trip.  I understand removing oneself as a journalist from the story, but sometimes putting oneself in there makes it a little more human.   Now, for radio I think this works wonderfully. For TV, if it was a documentary, or if explaining something in a live shot or stand up ,sure.  Otherwise pictures and video can highlight and explain the situation.  Also, Greene gave off a young spirit persona traveling across the country feel.  Yes, he is traveling across the country documenting peoples feelings during the first 100 days of  President Obama, but this kind of technique I feel reaches out to that younger audience.  Hence, he talks to and about young adults , so I find it appropriate that he used this edgy more conversational approach. 

We have been taught to compile different versions of our stories when it comes to the Internet component and the actual story.  Greene changed a few things here and there on the website, but otherwise the sound-bites were the same. He removed his personal narrations ( the I's and Me's) but otherwise you could follow along with the audio and the text.  Despite the similarities, the written version still paints a picture even without the sound.  He uses descriptive words and it brings the story alive. 

Since I'm on the topic of aliveness, Journalism life is going pretty good.  I feel stressed but I think I know how to handle to some degree.  I am really enjoying learning!  I know the grades can scare people but I have decided to look past those letters and numbers.  My issue this week is writing. 

My new task in life, getting rid of being verbs.  I remember in middle school and high school teachers always took points off or scolded us for using being verbs.  Well, same thing in college. Not using being verbs consist of a lot of thinking. As I re-read this blog I accidentally skiped over being verbs because I am (BV) accustomed to using them daily.  As I write this sentence my conscious mind tries to reconstruct sentences to avoid being verbs.  The challenge requires a lot of patience, because after a while you want to tell everyone to forget it and just want to scream , " is , am , are , was , were , being , been , have , has , do , does , did!"  I get it, the English language consist of stronger verbs, but we use being verbs so frequently it becomes a hard habit to stop. 

So , here.  " I Sophia Beausoleil will ( being verb) try my hardest to quit the use of being verbs in my writing and daily vocabulary.  I understand in the long run this challenge can and will enhance my writing, but there is no guarantee that I will stop the use completely."

Hope everyone has a great week!

Cheers,

Sophia Beausoleil 

Keeping the "Watchdog" Out of the Cage.

This past weekend I read an article by Jennifer Dorroh called "Endangered Species" in the American Journalism Review.  It pointed out how as money becomes tighter, news bureaus shrink and shut down, democracy is at stake.  The article gave an example about Copley News Service Washington bureau.  This bureau unfolded the story about former Congressman Randy 'Duke' Cunningham,  and his connection with bribe-taking.    In the article,  former bureau chief for the company had state, " Nobody else would've gotten Duke Cunningham.  USA Today, AP, New York Times, none of them would devote resources to a backbench, local San Diego congressman in that kind of detail." The article goes on to say "local newspapers and newspaper companies are backing away from Washington coverage or dropping it altogether."   Another example is Newhouse News Service. The newspaper they served was not able to pay for their services hence forcing them to shut down November 7.  So right after the elections , editors and others were eliminated.  For other bureaus, they are cutting back on space, working from cars or working from from the Capitol itself.  The main concern the article poses is that there is a need for, "regional presence in Washington in terms of keeping up with the interests in Washington." 

I understand this article caters towards the newspaper industry, but I find this article brings up a very important issue.  With all the cut backs, how are regional newspapers going to follow their representatives to Washington and be the ultimate "watchdog."  I remember freshman year reading Elements of Journalism by Bill Kovach.  There was an example highlighting the fact that for a country to take full control they have to control the media.  Now I'm not saying that is the objective of US politicians, but journalist have a big role in making sure there is a balance of power and something like this does not happen. Journalist in all mediums (tv, print , radio) can be viewed as an audit person, always checking , researching and making sure that politicians are doing what's best for their constituents.   So, having regional reporters follow their representatives is important due to the fact what might impact someone in Texas won't necessarily impact someone else in Ohio. It's vital that the people who voted them in are aware of the decisions regardless if it only applies to a state, because their decisions can effect the country all together.   It's scary to know that the industry is in such a bind to where regional journalist are out of jobs because of cutbacks.  I know there are ways to cover issues from Washington without being there but it's just not the same.  Having someone physically be there and truly getting to the point is completely different. 

After I finished my package for broadcast two, I realized that not only do I have a lot to learn, I have a lot to do in a short amount of time.  I like the challenge though, hence that's why I chose this major.  My next story is about sport injuries.  Specifically focusing on a woman who used to be a cheerleader and is still feeling the impacts of her cheerleading accident in college. This is just an idea, and I might focus on something else, but I think this would be a great opportunity to work on my writing and shooting skill.  Every opportunity is a good one, but I really want to learn how to be creative.  While working on my last package, I got really excited when it came to sit down and write.  This is a new phenomena for me , especially since I find writing to be weak point, but I truly want to get better.  What I learned from my last package is that I need to ask better questions.  I get so caught up with introducing the question that by the time the subject answers, they don't have much to say.  I have to be specific with out being specific. Become a better interviewer or writer isn't to just get a good grade. I know I could always be thinking, " oh your grade is on the line!"  but for some weird reason, I don't view this as something I'm doing for a grade.  I view it as my career and my job.  I think that is the better mind set any ways, rather than looking at it as a class project but rather an opportunity to become a great journalist. 

Cheers,

Sophia